CK Lynn

I liked it a lot, up to the point where you say "and where I can breathe" Do you mean "where I CAN'T breathe?" That would make more sense. Also, ...

Title changed to Carson Layne's story. Title suggestions PLEASE!

Does anyone have a suggestion for a better title?

Okay, this "Choice" title is not working. So: Which one do you like best: A. Between Darkness and Dawn B. Vengence C. Choice ( is there anyone who actualy likes ...

Updated and Revised version! “She’s dead, Clark. I accept that,” At 26, Carson Layne’s black hair had no sign of gray, but his eyes were so much older than is ...

No, really, I actually like it. The magic thing was very tentative.

Hmmm. Yeah, I just needed some way to tie in this scene, and magic jumped to mind (usually, I write fantasy/sci-fi). But I can see your point. So: updated synopsis. ...

Yeah, I had reservations about the double-C's, but those were just the names I thought of. Which one should I change, do you think? Clark Fisher or Carson Layne? P.S. ...

Cool, though it stiull didn't say anything definite. I actually liked to you-I thing, skitso as it might be, it added an element. P.S., can you please tell me how ...

Really, really good and intruging. I can't wait to read the next chapter. The only thing I can tell you is that "bloodcurdling" is one word, not two.

I don't know what possessed me to write this, it kind of just happened. These two police officers, Carson Layne (who has had something else tragic in his past) and ...

A poem of mine. One of the better ones I've written (though that isn't saying much).

I really, really wanted to like this, especcially with the fantastic title. But somehow it wasn't serious enough. The ryhme didn;t work. I think it'd be better with a bit ...

It was okay. You had a sort-of ryhme thing going on, then dropped it. It could be longer.

I liked this. The space between every line was kind of unnesecary, though. Also, Lied doesn't need to be capitalized. Punctuation, please!